US Democrat Ro Khanna says he was detained by armed Israeli settlers
US Democrat Ro Khanna says he was – Thinking Process: 1. **Analyze the Request:** * **Role:** Professional editor. * **Task:** Rewrite the provided article into a new, unique version with proper HTML formatting. * **Source URL:** https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/articles/c0qyk9jwq9no?at_medium=RSS&at_campaign=rss * **Original Title:** US Democrat Ro Khanna says he was detained by armed Israeli settlers * **Source Language:** English (must be preserved). * **Rules:** * Language: English. * Preserve factual accuracy (names, dates, numbers, quotes). * Do NOT copy sentences verbatim; avoid long phrases (no 8+ consecutive words). * Change structure: reorder paragraphs and vary wording. * Preserve direct quotes using `
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